Essay feedback from Amber

 - do not start a paragraph with however and not to mention 

- bibliography

- do not name a paragraph rebuttal and counter argument 

- try to summarise body text in conclusion, from the research I have done on xxx, I found out xxx. 

PLAN 

TUE: Porridge task, cop practical development 

WEDS: bibliography, refine essay 

THURS: develop cop practical, sign up 603 tutorial(?) 

FRI : 603 class